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Your vicious lullaby
lulls me awake
I can't help but hear your voice
ring through my defenses
jarring my thoughts
the luscious notes
that play off your throat
are as sweet as honey
the song that kills me softly
a dirge
a melancholy
written for me
your melody slowly poisons me
as it seeps into my skin
saturating my blood with its
Almond-scented Cyanide
my horror enchanted ballad
you've written just for me
gives me comfort
as it overpowers midnight's toll
©2007-2009 ~BananaBread
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just a poem...think what you will ^-^

EDIT: this is just a project for a class I'm really not emo!

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:iconsunflowerwithpower:
Neat! But dark... I like it!

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It was me....I was the turkey all along!
(as taken from Gir in Invader Zim)
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SORRY! I was feeling in a dark mood kind of recently but I promise I'll write some more happy ones in the future ^-^. I'm glad you like it though!

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
:iconsunflowerwithpower:
STOP SAYING YOUR SORRY! Theres no need to be sorry for being in a dark mood. Plus dark is good, i mean look at Edgar Allen Poe, darker than the other side of the moon.

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It was me....I was the turkey all along!
(as taken from Gir in Invader Zim)
:iconbananabread:
lol! I'm sorry!!!!!

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
:iconsunflowerwithpower:
Stop it!

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It was me....I was the turkey all along!
(as taken from Gir in Invader Zim)
:iconbananabread:
gomen...I'll stop promise!


*cough* *cough* or at least try anyways

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
:iconsunflowerwithpower:
YOU better! :shakefist:

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It was me....I was the turkey all along!
(as taken from Gir in Invader Zim)
:iconcurseyoutoheck:
OOOOOOOO Hannah i likey! the imagery is FANTASTIC! plus all the paradoxes are great i <3 the first two lines! tis a great way to start a poem!

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CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU TO HECK!
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merci beaucoup!

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince

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