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Purple shades of night
A cool calm descending
As the stars appear
Sitting with a loved one
An inviting shoulder
A warm embrace
Shadows dance along the wall
Completing their ritual
Closing my eyes
The scents of roses and chocolate
Fill my senses
Solitude shared
With one other
All alone
In an ear piercing silence
Joy spreads across my face
In a smile
One touch causes
An overdose of
Ecstasy
©2006-2009 ~BananaBread
:iconbananabread:

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one word...daydreams, sometimes they come true, sometimes they don't ^-^

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:iconmadabi:
wow.... thats amazing!

Its seriously awesome i love all the contrast and how it relates t other things!

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"Chocolate is the answer"
:iconmatto-sensei:
The picture matches the poem beautifully! Plus, I can only imagine the type of situation you were in that inspired you to write this poem! Must had been magical! ^__^

P.S. Sorry if that last sentence had some sort of "newb" grammer mistake in it. ;_;
:iconsmartster:
Very descriptive; the imagery and metaphor was a nice touch. ^_^

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:heart: ~13lade6rip & ~Smartster :heart:
:iconimperfectionisfatal:
I love this, Hannahz.
How it can be turned to mean different things.
Juxtaposition and imagery.
It's great.
:iconbananabread:
thank you! ARIGATO! ^-^ lol I like the word "juxtaposition"

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
:iconxxxsicknessxxx:
thats a very pretty poem I like it

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Cheero And I love the ATM machine, its our secret meeting place....=)
:iconbananabread:
thank you muchly ^-^

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
:iconsetzuo:
One of the few poems I've ever read that actually felt completed. Like I should capitalize complete because of how well rounded the idea was.

Good stuff.
:iconbananabread:
thank you ^.^ I appreciate it...

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince

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