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Untitled by ~BananaBread:iconBananaBread:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed




Sadness calls
   Depression beckons
Love's high falls
   A force to reckon
He broke my heart
   And I broke his
I knew from the start
   It would end like this

His gentle caress
   Leaves ache and pain
Our lives left a mess
   My head hung in shame
A life of wanting
   A life of regret
Those memories are haunting
   A wish to forget

The dying embers
   That flicker and burn
The love I remember
   For his love I yearn
He's happy now
   Without me by his side
I wonder how
   We let our love die

"I'm sorry!" I scream
   I just need him back
The blood to redeem
   The faith that I lacked
I still love him
   Yet his face still haunts me
The future looks dim
   Our second love will never be
©2007-2009 ~BananaBread
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Author's Comments

A poem about people in love that broke up. written from the perspective of a girl because I am a girl and I wanted to get this poem done on time ^-^

another poem done for a class. It's really cheesy or sappy or whatever. i'm sorry...I'm not good at writing poems about this mushy stuff...

(btw I did not make the preview image it is copyrighted to Madalina Iordache, I am just a fan of hers)

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~curseyoutoheck May 19, 2007, 7:08:49 PM
I like it the begining is great! I like the darkness!

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CURSE YOU! CURSE YOU TO HECK!
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Mood: Love ~MysticDragon129 May 19, 2007, 7:13:32 PM
Love it! :heart:
You're really good at this sort of thing! :clap:

I envy your awesome poetry skills! :ninjaeat:
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~BananaBread May 19, 2007, 7:59:28 PM
thank you ^-^

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
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~BananaBread May 19, 2007, 8:01:35 PM
thank you thank you ^-^ I'm not really all that good but thanks!

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
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~Dreams-of-Wings May 19, 2007, 8:22:17 PM
Very nice! I like the rhyme scheme. :aww:

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気持ち悪い。
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~BananaBread May 19, 2007, 8:35:06 PM
lol thank you ^-^ I had to mimic some lord byron poem or something.

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
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*furubalunchbox May 19, 2007, 8:56:07 PM
this makes me really sad and depressed
good job :]

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"Happiness is only real when shared."
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~BananaBread May 20, 2007, 3:01:19 PM
hahah thank you thank you ^-^

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"on risque de pleurer si l'on s'est laisse apprivoiser" -Le Renard dans Le Petit Prince
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~TheCosmicWeinerDog May 20, 2007, 7:43:02 PM
OMG! EMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOO!!!!!

yup yup

sound like an AFI song XP

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When life gives you pies, Make Piemonade.
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